We have been learning to write a variety of different styles of poems using different poetic techniques. Have a read of some of these fantastic poems. See if you can find examples of rhyme (same ending sound), alliteration (same first letter repeated), metaphors and similes (comparing two unlike things).
The Storm
By Hamish
Lightning streaked past as bright as the sun.
Thunder boomed like drums over head.
The sky was greyer than an old picture.
The rain stung like bee stings.
Trees fell like jenga towers
I ran inside faster than light.
I remember
By Kate
I remember Heidi with her soft and luxurious fur.
I remember her tail swishing happily behind her.
I remember her sweet and calming purr as she got patted by me.
Colours
By Saskia
What is orange? My fluro socks sitting on my feet.
What is green? The leaves rustling in the trees.
What is pink? My ruler bending and twisting around.
What is blue? The sky dotted with fluffy white clouds.
What is yellow? A lemon skinning as bright as the sun.
Bunnies
By Sarah S
Bunny, bunny, bunny.
Black, white, grey bunny.
Big, small, medium bunny.
Bouncing, hopping, eating bunny.
Sleeping, running, cuddling bunny.
Bunny, bunny, bunny.
Football
By Tom
Saves the ball
Dribbling up the wing
We're all in the big stadium
The big TV's on the sides
Nice pass down the line
Hot dogs, donuts, hot chips
Full time
Flowers (A limerick)
By Lily
There once was a rose from Welly
It was a little bit smelly.
It was almost going to die
But instead she started to fly.
Oh, did I mention she is called Kelly.
Tree (A question poem)
By Harrison
Oh tree
Where are your leaves?
Why aren't you growing?
Is it autumn already?
Why are the branches falling?
Broken (An -ing poem)
By Alex
running
slipping
falling
crying
weeping
sitting
Production
By Katherine
Cool costumes and crazy kids.
We did the dance to Dynamite.
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